All Comments on 'Wednesday Night'

An outstanding short story for a beginner. Some might say you have the wrong category since LW is for sex outside of marriage, but all kinds get posted here. Keep writing, and maybe try for longer and use the past tense.It usually works better.

Your story is a good 5* story as it reminds us that some loving wives are just that. Loving wives.

I had a torrid relationship with a beautiful woman last year. We were both busy people, so we stole what time we could to be together. Usually an hour per week, frequently on a Wednesday, which gave new meaning to "hump day" for us. A score of "her 4, me 1" was typical -- she would get on top of me and ride my hard cock to a rapid series of orgasms, accompanied by loud screams. When she was satisfied, she'd give herself to me in whatever position I wanted. The relationship is over now, but it was a helluva lot of fun for a year. Thanks for the memories!

Certainly adventurous, but NOT the wife. She just set the restriction on time!

Also certainly True Loving Wife!

no rating, although HOT (within restriction)

This is LW, for sure...but sometimes it seems like a compendium about how to fuck comfortably the wife...others it seems the description of a game, showing the score every few minutes...And forgot what is essencial: The love they had for each other... 2*

A true "LOVING WIFE" story

A true loving wife story. I prefer this to any cuckold crap.

do i have other outstanding traits, TK U MLJ LV NV