by BoundForYourPleasure
Fun story sadly quite short. I like the real people into real bondage characters you've created. I'd hang with them (and tighten the knots) if requested. A bit more detail would be good if it didn't bog down the story. Maybe break the chunks of text into smaller blocks for ease of reading. Or do exactly what you've been doing and I'll remain charmed by it.
This would be an excellent start to a series, at least it appears that was the intent. I would love to have seen how this escalates.