by jj48
You start in 1st person of the mom, then go to 1st person of the son. Then back again. Which is it?????
were you reading? It's not her son. It's her daughter and the entire story was written in the 1st person as the daughter.
I liked it, by the way.
Dammmm..wow,haha i'm always just taken aback by these erotic stories.haha i wish they were my neighbors!
This is one of the hottest stroke stories I've ever read. :)
The story could still use a bit of 'fleshing up' in a manner of speaking.
It would be wonderful if we had a bit of backstory on the two characters, it gives them a more rounded feel.
Excellent!!
Nice story i am a young girl of age 19 and ths story really make me feel wet bt i thnk writer shld include sem detail lyk hw mom tken such a bold decision of doing lesb incest with daughter in such a rapid manner etc
was a good story till you started calling her mommy, i have never in my life heard a full grown adult call thier mother mommy or dad daddy
My adult daughter still calls me daddy and her mom, mommy...especially when she cumming...
Please write some more.