All Comments on 'Welcomed Guests Ch. 03'

Gotta love the slow buildup between Amanda and Hank... I just can't wait for the actual moment they get together... I also wonder what role Penny will play.. I'm betting it'll happen while he's watching the girls getting it on... Love the story, can't wait for more.. great job so far..

A very good plot very well build and outstanding effort. Keep upp the great work waiting for next part please upload it soon

its good and all but way way to long its 3 chapters down they still haven't done anything.

please get to the point in next installment

Oh my GAWWWD! Where's chapter 4?

Awww Mayaan!! Was going to read next chaper and isnt one....

Hurry up already :)

Finish the damn thing!!!!

Sorry how many brothers 1or 2 Hank or Henry?

Please finish it!

Oh, hey anonymous on 7/24/13, Hank is a VERY common nickname for Henry.

they needed to have a threesome

I have to say that I love your writing style. I hope you finish the story with a couple more chapters sometime soon. It would be a shame not to see it finished.

Thanks.

really? i am sorry i read this,all this was is a long drawn out lesbian sorry story

Had potential but you ruined with the excessive use of the Penny (wife) character. This wasn't the incest story we all hoped it would be.

I really love the story! It was a nice, drawn out tease that actually included plot! I might suggest a proof reader to help identify 'to' vs 'too'. You are a great writer!

This started out all well and good but too much of wife and not brother. Needs moved to different category as their is no incest here. I hate it writers do not realise when actual siblings read this trying to get sense of their feelings only to be let down.

Please make a part 4!

Story is good, characters semi-realistic, but the way you close it with what would seem a "future fantasy finish". Change your moniker to "I deliver blue balls", that is where you are taking your readers. Deliver the goods, and keep up the flair for the fantastic.

This is so hot. I would love to see how it develops further

if you haven't written another chapter by now you are probably dead. And if you are not and have not written the next chapter or chapters you ruined this entire story. You get a 1 unless you have more to it. I am tired of authors writing really good stories and not finishing.