All Comments on 'Well-Bred Family Ch. 01'

Great start. Please continue and don't make us wait long.

I think once the story gets to the real premise of the story, it will be better. I hope that this chapter is just the background story and will become erotic instead of wet sports.

I can visualize the turmoil that the women will go through being breeding cows to a tribe of uncivilized natives.

I would hope that the fat sister will lose her extra weight by being starved from lack of food and used as a receptacle for the natives semen.

Since the story is being told by one of the captive, one would have to believe that at least he survived.

An unusual story but interesting as to where the author will take the story on to its finish.

Love this so far!! Please continue!!

now the possibilities are virtually endless.

finish your book, copyright it and send it to a publisher

I am back tracking to read Part 1 after reading Part 3 as a new submission then on to part 2. Very good. 5 STARS. Intense and interesting. Well written and good flow.

Ilove it! Please continue. 5 Stars from me!

You somehow managed to take a brilliant idea and turn it into crap... nobody gets horny for an ugly fat chick pissing and shitting while walking... like I said you could have made a master piece and u turned it into shit

this was NOT erotic in any sense of the term

golden showers/scat.... um not even close

you don't have to put those details into a story to show at what lengths they've been brought down to

for goodness sake, fingers in vaginas and butt holes pretty much tell it all hmm?

I wouldn't give a wooden penny for anything else you write

This is what a story does, it tells. It gives the mind an eyes view.

well done

waste of time....

gave you a 5

Family taken as slaves

A family of missionaries taken by a pirates on the high seas finds the bonds of social conventions and taboos are set aside. It's a well told story reminiscent of the problems faced in the heyday of the Barbary pirates.