by PenPal2001
to write complete and utter racist rubbish, and why would a perfectly decent white wife decide she wanted to look like a skank with a white and black baby. You are obviously incapable of writing anything else so give up. I notice that you do not give details in your bio so obviously a black man trying to convert more white wives to your own kink. Utter crap.
@Anonymous: You call the story utter racist rubbish, but you obviously read it from beginning to end. Stories about white women being taken by black men are what you find on this site, right? I'm glad that you secretly enjoyed it.
Not to single oiy this particular story because I've seen a handful of these plot devices on this site but I have to wonder what is the motivation for a person to feel compelled to pick up a phone when they were having sex. it seems so rude to me but that's just my opinion.
The anonymous commentator obviously hasn't the slightest idea what the word racist means.
A wife that enjoys the attention of a black lover and a husband who tolerates the situation as long as he's getting his sexual needs satisfied is a very fortunate situation and the complete opposite of racist.
You, Mr Anonymous are the true narrow minded bigoted racist.
This is a good well written 5 star story !!!!!!!
Somewhat different to your other stories but brilliant again! Always look forward to your next story! Love to see same come back for round 2 with Kelly and Heather!
I liked the story, very true to life in my experience. Had best outcome to having a truly open marriage. Good job, I want to read more xoxoxoxo Annette
I understand your story is not for everybody before me it's absolutely perfect and I encourage you to keep writing
This is one of the best cuckold stories I have ever read. For once the black man has feelings and isnt just a sex machine. The menage-a-trois grows gradually and realistically too. Well done! Part 2 would be good...
Sorry but I can not comprehend these cuckolds, letting their wives have a black lover and raise a black child.... A brief affair I could understand and forgive but the rest.... Out the door and accept the minimal divorce if you want to live. If Jake wants to argue I'll gladly introduce him to my attorneys Colt, Smith & Wesson.
very very good and hot
i have learned to enjoy nigger cock like her and have for 8 years
hope u will do more
bettyluvsit yahoo
Finally, three people who behave like humans despite the complexity of their relationship. Well done, thank you!
No sensible man would allow his wife to fuck someone else and become pregnant!
I loved the story and hope you add more. The cuckold and pregnancy thing is amazing. Keep up the amazing stories.
You went out of your way paint Tom to be the least masculine man in the story. You made his cock, his build, his sexuality and his ability to be below average. If he was such a loser, why would anyone marry him? Or having cheated on him, stay married to him?
It was so cliched the you literally ruined the story for me, which is disappointing because the story was quite good if you had made him human. as it stands, you made him one step removed from being a woman.
After Tom learns that his cheating slut wife has been fucking the dark meat,he needs to chop off her head while she's giving Jake head! In exchange for Jake not reporting him to the cops,he can regularly take Jake's snake up his ass as well as let him fire loads down his throat!
Piss-poor cuckold story made even worse by the BBC angle!
I do not know any man to be this cowardly - he should. Have bought a gun and killed them both! I hated it abd I'm a Black South African!
black man good for nothing but fucking and keeping a herd of tattooed white breeding cattle....check
white cocks small, black cocks huge, white wimps, black adonis...check
amoral scumbag worthless, heartless, whorish excuse for a wife...check
utterly gutless, balless, dickless excuse for a husband...check
wife sharing presented as a sign of crippling weakness and cowardice of the husband instead of the vast majority of people in open relationships who simply have a trusted friend who sometimes help add some kinky spice to sex....check
Three worst people alive decide to breed....check.
Story should have ended with a gas explosion in the home killing every one of these wretched excuses for human beings
This was a good story that managed to keep the readers hooked. Keep writing.
There has to be more chapters! How she gets black pregnant! 12 months from having her first baby.
How Tom deals with it. How about 20 years in the future Thomas Jr fucks his black sister! They make a baby brother/sister!
Another slut wife. Tom took the baby, got a divorce, got full custody and moved away. Who wants a BBC slut for a wife? Ugly story.
1 star
Just another stupid story trying to make white husband's look wimpy and inferior to nigger men. Tom should have kick the no good whoring slut to the curb and let her live with blacky. Terri would soon find out Jake would quit work and live off of her money, and then he would be pimping her out for other niggers to fuck as no white man in his right mind would want to stick his cock inn a disease ridden whore like Terri.
You need to make another chapter. Also go into what happened to her friend who also got pregnant
I'm a White guy in a relationship with a Bisexual Black woman, and we have great bareback sex. Had a few close calls and that's the thrill. When her female lover stops by we have great threesomes. However a couple of her married lesbian friends who have a desire to become parents asked her to borrow me to inseminate them naturally. Now they will enjoy the joys of Motherhood after I seeded them
Jestem rogaczem i to wielkim . Moją żonę kryje potężny , czarny jak kruk 52 letni kowal który ma chuja ogromnego i mamy jego piątkę dzieci . Jeszcze wiele kobiet żonatych urodziło jego dzieci . On jest reproduktorem w naszym miasteczku nr.1 i naruchał mnóstwo dzieci i zwłaszcza białym małżeństwom a ta historia jest cudowna . Każda piękna biała kobieta powinna przynajmniej raz urodzić czarne dziecko . Lepiej by było , gdyby miała dwoje lub nawet troje czarnych , pięknych dzieci a jej mąż wylizywałby czarny juks z jej świeżo wyruchanej pipeczki
The "arrangement" was kind of hot, but her obvious preference for Jake over her husband is a downer. Wanting to have a black baby is a complete turn-off. Messing around with Jake's black friends would make a very hot story line and since he's a big fan of interracial sex something that Tom should like her to get involved in.
Nice story, like that baby turned out white
Reading story you would have thought it would have been black