by TX_Fun_Dr
What a brilliant story, when will you be continuing this story thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Can't wait for the follow up.
Really love this story, one of the hottest on the site, will your fans be getting a sequel?
You have done other stories since then. Why the hell haven't you finished this one? Oh and by the way I tried logging on as myself but couldn't get it to work from my phone.
both chapters 1 & 2 are great. when will you get back to this series?
I am hoping you return to this story soon. I enjoy your other work, but think this one has the potential to be really special
I agree this better than chaper 1. Hope you are inspired to write more chapters.
I rated Ch. 1 as a five. I'm not ready to rate this one yet, as I skimmed through it, wanting to find the events between Doc and Miranda. HOPEFULLY, you will publish Ch. 3, where they get together, and Miranda joins the group. I'll rate this chapter after I have read it, lol. I hope you keep going, as it is an interesting plot and story.
Great story! Wished we could have seen the mom with Doc, though. As this was written over 3 years ago, I don't see a third chapter happening. Too bad.
That was so hot. Looking forward to the rest of the story.
Great story. Not many grammatical errors. Hot as hell. Keep it up. :)
Great stories I can't wait for the next chapter I am really hoping you continue
But this is a rare exception. No comments needed here other than BRILLIANT STORY (Again)! Can't wait to read the next entry!
This is one of the best written stories I have read in quite some time...couldn't stop reading.....please keep the next chapters..and I hope there are many....coming....
What a wonderful horny story, I look forward to the next part having missed the first part.
Hope you will continue this really soon. Can't wait for part 3,4,5 whatever!!
I think I'm going to be hard for the rest of the day......looking forward to seeing how this continues. With the girls training, involving Miranda.....just can't wait.