All Comments on 'What a Guy Won't Do Ch. 06'

by hotwords229

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NudyDudeNudyDudealmost 13 years ago
Nice approach

Like the way you describe the feelings of his sister, mom and girlfriend. Hope you will finish Jill's story.

hotwords229hotwords229almost 13 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the feedback!

Thanks for your comment, I wish more people would say something about the stories whether they like them or not--I'm not sure if I'm wasting my time or not!

Anyway, thanks again and don't worry, Jill is about to be taken care of!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Awesome series -- don't leave us hanging

Great stuff -- from the "involuntary" nature of his CFNM to the different points of view -- you're a great writer with a very good sense of pacing, characterization, and sensuality. Please continue -- don't leave us hanging.

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