by hotwords229
Like the way you describe the feelings of his sister, mom and girlfriend. Hope you will finish Jill's story.
Thanks for your comment, I wish more people would say something about the stories whether they like them or not--I'm not sure if I'm wasting my time or not!
Anyway, thanks again and don't worry, Jill is about to be taken care of!
Great stuff -- from the "involuntary" nature of his CFNM to the different points of view -- you're a great writer with a very good sense of pacing, characterization, and sensuality. Please continue -- don't leave us hanging.