by hotwords229
Great stuff -- from the "involuntary" nature of his CFNM to the different points of view -- you're a great writer with a very good sense of pacing, characterization, and sensuality. Please continue -- don't leave us hanging.
Thanks for your comment, I wish more people would say something about the stories whether they like them or not--I'm not sure if I'm wasting my time or not!
Anyway, thanks again and don't worry, Jill is about to be taken care of!
Like the way you describe the feelings of his sister, mom and girlfriend. Hope you will finish Jill's story.