All Comments on 'What Could Have Been Ch. 02'

Your story was absolutely amazing I couldnot put it down i wanted to keep reading please right another one it would be greatly appreciated

Shut up man stop writing

Nice brother and sister episode.

Hope to see more

I do not understand. Why doesn’t this excellent work have one. hundred comments and all kinds of fans. This is good. I was not in favor of it at first, but popping her cherry in the shower has advantages. All the mess goes down the drain. And there will be some mess, it is nature’s way.

Hank you for writing this. You have received little thanks for your efforts.You deserve much more!

Al.

Meh...this was mediocre at best. Brother goes down on little sister and makes her squirter, blah blah blah blah blah. S.O.S.D.D.

I almost voted a two on this one because I was bored to tears. It's a guy having sex with his sister. They're NOT making love because there's no words describing adoration or emotional ties between them. They are just having sex. 3/5