All Comments on 'What I Wanted... Sort Of'

Note to author - it would be helpful if you forewarn readers about the overly bisexual theme of your story. Lacking the warning you got a 1*. Sorry.

If the whole story was about him sucking another man and swallow, and even him saying: "forgetting everything except cleaning the beautiful cock...", why in hell is this in LW? 1*

ya lousy in the LW department. more like it should of been in BDSM, group sex.

I did not care for the story. No character development at all and clearing the wrong category.

1* Wrong category and really fkn bad!

Cannot quite understand the wifes actions or reasoning.

Surely the strap on dildo would have been evident under the kimono from the beginning?

Why did she suddenly want anal ?

Sorry so many inconsistencies this story needs to be carefully revised.

What a moron hubby is. If my wife asked me to touch some guys dick let alone suck it and be abused and humiliated by him I'd kick them and her out. There is nothing in the world I want to do or see that would have me accept being a homosexual for.

His wife arranged for herself to have gay sex, his wife arranged for her husband to suck another man's cock. So why wasn't this posted in Gay sex section?

And why is he still thinking this woman he was married to still loves and respects him? Both women got off, the guy who got his dick sucked got off, and all the birthday boy husband got was a mouth full of cock, a mouth full of jizz, then a mouth full of some queer's tongue. And with the wife acting perfectly familiar and sexually comfortable with the other couple, what do you want to bet she's been sucking and fucking both of them behind her husband's back?

Loving Wife? Its time for him to take this bitch full of garbage to the curb and go find a loving wife.

Obviously it could not be correctly classified but that one hurt...

Not much of a story with the wimp hubby watching his wife swooning over an older man and jerking off! Come on give us a real story instead of this cuck crap!

to offset the asshsole of LIT.

Just the tip of the iceberg, the wife is cheating and manipulating her submissive hubby. If he finally gets any balls he will dump her and move on. To believe she just happened to meet a swinging couple and arranged this spontaneously is a crock. This is not the birthday present he really expected and wanted, this was her perversion . Not His.

to offset the real asshole of Lit, Bonny, alias. needyou200. You should be proud of yourself, the only person I know that got her ass kicked off a porn site.

sucking some guy's dick? That might have been her fantasy, but not his. Who the hell had the birthday anyway? Another STUPID STORY!

This was a crime on par with date rape. BS. Can I do. FTDS .with the malfeasants getting their due?