All Comments on 'What If I Had Submitted . . .'

by darkeyes5011

Sort by:
  • 3 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
It's not my fantasy AT ALL

And when he gets loose I know two women that will be paying a heavy, painful price for abusing and assaulting him. With an emphasis on the pain. And you never actually made me believe that he would allow her to tie him up. So this whole scenario is weak sauce and not very believable. But write a sequel where he abuses them and it might be interesting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Really good scene. Didn't expect the "bi" aspect.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Clearly KGB trained

"I won't hurt you" "

"Just don't protest so much"

"You will enjoy this"

thank you comrade Putin

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous