by chelsweet
I like this story but I would have found it better reading if you had read over your draft before submitting. Sometimes its necessary to read many drafts before finally accepting what you are looking for. Secondly this is a written story not an arithmetic exercise, always write numbers in a story, never use figures such as I am 5.2 inches tall, which in itself is ridiculous because you left out the foot. Otherwise I liked your writing and look forward to more submissions
you are right about some things, to me the physical aspect of a relationship comes much later after I get to know a woman as a person, but hey that is just me though