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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Since you started with concern for her partner and discussing his possible approval and pregnancy, that created dramatic tension for me. When you "skipped" ahead in the story I had anticipated you saying I was a bit let down and my interest waned wanting a bit more character development and tease drawing things out with more issues to work out. Sorry, only going for 3 stars on this one...

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