All Comments on 'What You Are'

onmyknees82, your story delves deep into the non-con realm, and the low score reflects most readers' discomfort more than the quality of the writing (which is quite good). I would enjoy seeing what D/s adventures you could imagine in a more consensual setting, but, regardless, please continue writing.

Tell me more.

I agree with Visioneer... Good writing. Interested to see where this goes. Would also love to see you write a bdsm that is more consensual.

I think it fits the category perfectly and if people want something consensual, there are lots of those in bdsm. No need to change ;)

Like your writing. Waiting for the next installment.

So disappointing to find a writer that gets me riled up only to see they've abandoned their story. I really hope you continue!