All Comments on 'What You See is Not What You Get'

I really enjoyed this story, very romantic.

I like how you have developed the characters. I hope that there is going to be a chapter two. Thanks for the good read.

ships passing in the night kinda stuff.

kudos

Dan and Lynn/Sylvia WANT us to know what's happened to them... *please* open that door for us all!

What more could anyone want from a story? The characters seem to come alive and make you want to know more. Dan is just the sensitive, loving, kind of man that Lynn needs. Surely there is more to this story. Marty, you are amazing!

Hi Marty,

I found this story almost by accident. Fate must have led me to it. I didn't know about this story.

It is simply SUPERLATIVE!!!! It's yet another of your intriguing stories with all the best elements. Attraction. Passion. Honesty. Tragedy. Most of all it has Love - tender, caring love.

You certainly have a great gift for writing. I'm in awe of you and your storytelling talents.

Please honor us with another chapter in the lives this lovely, loving couple.

All the best,

Ed

Loved the story. as a disabled man it gave hope that one day I could have an encounter like that. Liked the twist of "Lynn" being the witness protection program!

What the hell just happenned...

A romantic tragedy, a scenario that is beautifully thought through and brilliantly transferred to text.