All Comments on 'When the Lights Went Out Ch. 02'

Can't wait for the next chapter!

You are a good author with lots of talent but PLEASE have someone proof your stories to get the right words. A spell checker usually won't find a wrong word that is spelled correctly. For example, next to last paragraph; "lesson" should have been lessen, "guild" should have been guilt and others throughout the chapters.

The story is still over the top and easily received 5 stars. I look forward to reading more of your contributions. Thank you.

I'm sorry for the scene at the end. Why would any writer let that happen to a character in a romance? It's because the story is also as much about post-apocalyptic survival. Just surviving is a win by itself in a world where enduring is the rule. I have an idea for a final chapter, but any ideas from my readers would be welcome.

When is the next chapter coming out?

Please write soon!

writer megan seemed more like a slut skank cheating than ANY rape victim.