All Comments on 'Where My Loyalties Lie Ch. 01'

If he loves his wife, he'll consent to the reduction. I did, despite the fact that I really enjoyed my wife's enormous boobs. They were still big after surgery, and she was much more comfortable in her own skin afterward. Shopping for bras and clothes became a pleasure instead of an ordeal. I know this site is about fantasies, but....

i gave this an Unhappy 4 stars ....

mainly because it's the 1st story on the persons profile

and i am interested to see how the stroy works out

right now i have no idea how this story made it into the Romance Category

also i was annoyed by the over use of the blank / empty line

Cheap way to make the story look longer than it really is

by putting a blank empty line between every sentance

it gets Old real fast , and nobody really falls for the trick

it just annoys people

A promising new writer. Looking forward to chapter 2

NEEDS a chapter 2 maybe use a twist

I really liked chapter 1 and eagerly awaiting ch 2. Very curious about the direction the story will go in.

Not bad. But, how does this fit into the category of romance ? There really wasn't much romance in it. Or anything relatively erotic,besides a wife trying to soften up her Husband enough to get an agreement out of him with sexual favors to get what she wants.

Maybe he ought to take the secretary up on her offer. If her mother is single, tits alright with him!