Where the Lines Overlap Ch. 02

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With breathing now deep and labored, Taron put a hand up to the wall, supporting his weight against the unmoving slab of concrete. Coincidentally, his palm had landed exactly on the shower sensor, and with his body flushing with hot blood, the shower temperature shot up, suddenly hot.

The blast of heat shocked my system, sending my hard on deflating faster than it had grown. I jumped back from Taron as his body slumped against the wall, his back rising and falling as he caught his breath.

Then I saw it, the bite marks I had made in his shoulder. The red bruises I had planted on his neck. The finger marks I had left around his wrists. Reality hit me faster than a hovercar traveling at full speed.

Fuck! Did I just rape Taron?

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Sm1982,

It's so funny to kepp a record on your comments in this website. So much idiocy over the years, and I hope it's not too late to save you from having this as a permanent state.

lonesomedove66lonesomedove66about 7 years ago
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I agree with you in regards to Taron's reaction to Kev but remember Kevin has always thought he was inferior to Taron and has low self esteem issues. He has not figured out that it was a natural reaction but I feel sorry for him thinking that way and losing his cool. Although Taron is not at fault for making him feel the way he does it will be interesting to see how this unfolds.

sm1982sm1982almost 8 years ago
Kev, you idiot, you did NOT rape Taron!

Poor Taron for falling for this fool lol a bit harsh but from his own version of what has occurred, Taron's anger turned to lust and his responses to Kev's words were whimpers should have clued him in on the fact that no, Taron was not resisting him! From what I can recall of going back to this chapter, Taron, an Elite, has amazing strength and could easily take Kevin so even if Kevin's actions weren't from passion, he wouldn't have gotten far with Taron and probably would have been knocked out!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Loving this story

I just wish you would sort out the grammar with 'your' and 'you're'. It is so distracting to read at every chapter. Think... If you want to say 'you are', it's 'you're'.....,your is belonging to someone/something.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

So this is taron. I kinda like him even though he is a prick. Poor Kevin feeling like he is dumb. That shower scene was definitely intense and I thought you were going somewhere else with it. Tame is good but I'm curious to see what taron's reaction will be and how they can move on from this

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