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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
New Theme ?

This began as rape - then loving wife consentual extramarital fucking - but then she went looking for it didn't she (clothing style) - so your off to see the supposedly erotic wizzard - departing from the married sex theme - this wasn't (not) erotic - just rape without the frills - is that where you are going - not good - think about it before going further

Your prior efforts were much better - better reading - erotic

Now what?

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