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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Interesting Start

An interesting start, and very well written.

acupacupabout 6 years ago
A good start

I agree, well written.

I just found your writings, so forgive if you've made changes. The grammar is not bad wit the fore knowledge of English not being your primary language, so go for it. Only quirk that took me away from the story was the use of 24 hour time.

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"Tell me what a person finds sexually attractive and I will tell you their entire philosophy of life. Show me the person they sleep with and I will tell you their valuation of themselves."

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