All Comments on 'Whetstone High Sluts Ch. 02'

On the plus side the sex descriptions are pretty good for a beginner. From the grammar and spelling mistakes I am wondering if English is your second language. I've rarely seen so many mistakes per sentence. Additional problems are that there is no apparent reason for our hero to be so popular and there is very little characterization , the girls all read like the same person with different names.

I think it was a wonderful story. Liked the sex, but I think you should work on your grammar a little

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