All Comments on 'While I'm Away'

Thank you for your first story. It's well written. I can't say I enjoyed it as I don't get into sadism and mean people suck. What I really don't understand here is the lack of care by the supposed 'goddess' who sends him back to someone who left him scarred. Such a dominant isn't worth serving, in my opinion.

Wish I could find a woman to be that mean to me.

Really good story with several future scenarios available but as it’s a year since this was published will we ever see them?