All Comments on 'While the Cat's Away'

get and editor and get some advice, also, have your friends read things you write BEFORE you post here

this is such garbage i'm sorry i wasted a few minutes glancing at it

This was embarrassing crap

Short and to the point. I like the way you write. Thought it was hit!

Does no one writing here have any idea where the hymen is located? So you never got to break one. So what? You can look it up on Google.

This is only one of the flaws in this story. It is badly written crap. I have no idea what the people who laud your work were on. Clearly they were not reading this same piece of garbage.

Get serious help before you even consider posting anything else!

In England we don't say rubbers! We say condoms!!! A rubber is an eraser. Don't set your story in Kent and then use rubbers instead of conforms. Your pronouns are all over the place and I don't know who's perspective it's from. Stop writing!

This sucked! and yes find out where the Hymen is before you write about it.