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by Ed0613

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Just

SMILE!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
It's lacking something

I liked the story but the characters lacked development, most people don't just fall into bed. Try building a relationship between the characters, and make the stories a little longer.

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Like to talk to both men and women about erotic writing. I am always looking for people to help me edit my work and welcome input about spelling, punctuation, syntax and the general readability of my stories. Right now, (June 2013) I am doing research for the stories I write ...