All Comments on 'Who Do You Believe?'

famaliar story line well handled but i would have liked the final revenge to have been as detailed as lennys.

familiar theme, not executed with much panache. The husband's original response to the wife's infidelity didn't ring true. And the end was rushed. The end was in stark contrast to the rest of the story, that was told in a leisurely fashion.

very poorly thought out and enacted. Yes the evidence was needed, yes she needed to cum, after all she was a woman in heat. I am afraid I would not have stayed with her, break up the ring, get the cash, get her a good therapist and some good medical treatments for the possible diseases she was possibly exposed to. But she knows she did not trust her husband, she knows she was willingly manipulated, she willfully was seduced, used, and greatly enjoyed it. Such a woman as a wife is useless. She herself cannot the trusted nor believed. She lied to her husband repeatedly, she betrayed him, in deed and in act, her disrespect for him was total, and she broke her marriage contract. Cheating to get revenge is worse than cheating in the first place, it doesnt involve any emotions except hate and lust. Yep she and I would have been rich but we would have taken very separate paths. Life is to short to watch a known cheater 24/7 the rest of your life. No woman cheats by accident, it is always intentional and somewhat planned, and once a cheater always a cheater, just waiting on opportunity and rationalization.

in 3 minutes; why don't you actually sit down to think of some scenario and plot that actually have some minimal intelligence before you actually start typing the story?

but this was very poorly written....it did not flow well ...geeze to many problems to name...to short in places ...to long on others ...try childrens books nex time...better yet dont try a next time

Yes, it is fiction...but there's such a lack of credibility in this scenario that any REASONABLE person would have to disengage his brain completely to accept the basic premise, reactions, thought process and resolution of this story. If the author wanted to write a cuckold theme, then fine, but to hide that basic concept behind an unfaithful/revenge story which doesn't work because it's ridiculously plotted is just asking too much. You are underestimating the reader, author.

No man could be such a wimp dipshit.

This story is vile shit and far worse than your other long rambling drawn out story. Not only is the whole premise a difficult one from the getgo but there is NO possible reason WHY terry just had to have hot sex with the CEO whith VIC taking pictures.

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if you are going to go with a extreme event you need to set up the premise much better than you did

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OK, I'm an attorney too so I took your comments to heart, but even a non-attorney couldn't believe this plot. Vic takes pictures of his wife and the CFO having sex, but doesn't get her on tape AT THE HOUSE saying she doesn't want to have sex with him? So what does Vic have...just some tapes of his wife apparently willingly having sex with the CFO. Aside from the fact that there is absolutely no reason for Vic to do this - he has plenty of evidence already-he doesn't even do it correctly. And then he beats the crap out of the guy and he isn't charged??? Come on....at least try and make it believable.

Familiar plot with familiar holes. Somehow in this fantasy Vic managed to avoid being charged with felony assault and battery not once but twice. That's an amazing tribute to the efficacy of law enforcement, isn't it? The wife is, of course, the naive airhead who, instead of asking her husband if he's cheating on her, accepts the word of another individual in whom she should repose little trust. This is, I believe, called a complete breakdown in spousal communications. It's the stuff of which good marriages aren't made. In the annuals of "stupid", this is in the running for a Darwin Award.

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The storytelling is bad in places. The author uses narrative to describe what the characters say to each other. Fiction has a term for that called dialog. You should use it.

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As others have pointed out, the ending is rushed and rather like a fairytale where our hero and heroine ride off together into the sunset. Never mind that she's developed a rather rampant lust for strange dicks. Also, don't be bothered by Vic's testosterone overload that prompts him to cruise the highways and byways of Colorado and Hawaii looking for bad guys to pummel with his newfound uber manliness. *snort*

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Last but certainly not least, I never knew that winning a lawsuit was considered an inheritance. It's just amazing the legal nuances that you can learn from reading erotica.

However you will get a lot of gaff from the wimp and woosey husband brigade that is either, writen by butch lesbians masquerading as male authors, the little penis-wish they had BBC- brigade of hateful racist black men or just wimp and woosey men wishing to fulfill the fantasy of being stomped on.

In all reality you did make Vic look rather wimpy by allowing him to forgive his wife, How do you forgive natural stupidity.

I realize that you had to have a dumb ass stupid wife or ...no story...but did he have to be stupid and forgive her. It would have been more believable if he had sent her off to work in the local brotheral and lived high off her earnings.

It was a very rough way to handle it but it had the desired effect.. The really rough part for them was the next coupla three years, I'm sure..

The "writer" of this plodding, superficial piece of ... excrement ... notes right up front he doesn't have the faintest idea of how real life law works as demonstrated by his first "story" and then he proceeds to make the same damned mistake DELIBERATELY! You have to marvel at a man who just can't figure out what's wrong with that picture. As for the story, I didn't bother reading past half-way through the first page. The story line of a cheating wife convinced by a scheming other person to cheat because she thought her husband was cheating is pretty stupid to begin with (it's highly implausible -- people just don't act that way) but it's also been done a thousand times here on LE. This story is SO DULL it's hard to figure out why the "writer" bothered to post it. I think the "writer" needs to attend several years worth of writing classes before he embarrasses himself further.

Hi BlBones,

I'm sorry that authors like yourself are subjected

to relentless criticism from people who couldn't

write a quality story if their lives depended on

it.

Keep up the good work in spite of the 'critics'

on this site ...

After reading a few comments I have come up with a partial agreement. It was a bit rough in spots but as the title says I enjoyed the story,I am no critic I am a reader not a writer, so thank you for the story payback can be a bitch. This also shows you cant please all the people, heck it had payback, they got rich, and stayed together, what do these pricks want?

Again thank you for the entertainment, Mike from Texas.

... although it's fiction. I don't believe there are american wives who acts like Terry. You obviously underestimate the intelligence of woman. Almost I would loose my faith into the mental abilities of american people<p>It's my conviction that there are much more intelligent individuals in USA</p>

Sorry

<p><b>Nucleus</b></p>

I can only repeat what others have said, this is most moronic piece of crap I've seen here lately. I also am an attorney, & if you're going to write about legal matters, even if it's "Fiction" to quote your phrase, you should at least have some modicum of knowledge about what you're writing. You've been watching too much Matlock or Perry Mason, it's fried your brain. You obviously have some writing skills, why don't you write about matters you know, or god forbid, maybe you already are.

Why would you want to be with someone who couldn't trust you?

I would have loved to score this story higher but parts of the story was very mixed - some good and some bad. I liked the way Vic toke charge and figured out how to handle this situation. Terry became a total slut and bimbo which is not how she was characterized initially. Didn't she say that she would not fuck in front of her husband because of the possible damage to her marriage? She is so wired that once you get her aroused she becomes a total idiot? I am surprised that her lovers did not get her to disrespect her husband since the more evidence they could have on her the better corporate whore she would be. She would have called Vic all kinds of names. >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

While I understand why Terry would want to stay with Vic I could not think of one reason he would want to stay with her! They had only been married 3 years and she let 2 men talk her into a 3-way. Vic had put Lenny into the hospital but he did not want to interrupt his wife's pleasure with Mike? So what if she had to take a shower. If it really upset Vic to see Terry with another man (supposedly he is hurt bad by the pictures) as soon as Mike had been compromised then I would think that Vic would take action. Note with a second assault the police would reexamine the first case with Lenny. It is also very unlikely that Vic would be able to function as VP (was he qualifed for that position?) given the shock and awe he created among the senior ranks.>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Lastly, Vic knowing that his wife can be a slut in front of him or worse when he is absent does not reestablish trust. Nowhere in the story is there any remedytep taken to resolve their martial problems. Vic had pimped Terry out to get the bad guys. Terry clearly enjoyed being with other men. Once again I ask why should he stay with her?>>>>>>

Thanks for writing!

and from my view, that's pretty constructive as a literary/plot criticism. <p>

the central issue --- as least 90 percent of the average readers see it --- has little or nothing to do with cheating, "payback"/revenge, anger/sadness, or even conflict. in fact, there's none. <p>

the whole "story" can be succinctly summarized as of these "my wife's so bad, she turned me gay; and y'know what?, i love it" kind of gibberish nonsense, masquerading as a story about cheating and revenge. <p>

except for a few idiots, most readers and writers are clever enough to call a spade a spade, when they see it. that is to say, readers don't get "pissed" or "disgusted" (with both story/author, for example) for no reason; they simply speak their minds when they say a certain "story" is nothing more than a piece of "trash", that is gibberish nonsense.... this is one of them.

This theme (devious, evil bosses conning a beautiful but stupid wife) has been worked pretty hard at Lit; this story doesn't add anything new, unusual, or erotic. The theme itself is not really credible - it too easy for men with money and power to get women without having to resort to this kind of nonsense (look at Strom Thurman, for example). Plus the risk isn't worth it - would be just cheaper to buy it. Somehow the character development just doesn't happen in this variation. I'd advise the author to try again with something more original - stories don't have to be believable to be good if they are clever enough (e.g. "The Bought Husband" by JPB).

Writer, if this story works for you, please kill slice your throat and take yourself out of our gene pool! My God this was just pathetic.. I couldn't even force myself to finish it.

Wow you took a beating by some critics. I thought it was a good story. A bit long and I don't believe he would have his wife fucked again. I would also worry that she so easily forgot what was done to her and enjoyed the sex. Yes she was stupid. But I felt the pain and desire for revenge fomr or for him. Rarely do we get revenge on those that have wronged us. We just have to live with it. Well written and technically sound.

There were some grammar errors and spelling errors that a little care would have fixed prior to publishing. The plot was weak and difficult to believe, as so many others have indicated. Terry is stupid and selfish, while Vic is just stupid. By the way, a monetary settlement is taxable if it represents compensation for lost wages, but when it is awarded or settled as "damages" to replace something taken from somebody, it is just that; since no one can set a value on one's marriage, a wife's virtue, or whatever, the 18 million dollar award seems reasonable compensation for the loss and like an insurance payment, I think it would not ordinarily be taxable since it does not represent "income."

I enjoyed it...

I am shocked by the no SOBs who made negative comments...I really am worried about them...Folks, if you already read the comments before you read the story that this ain't your kind of story, then why in the HELL do you spent your time reading it...It's like buying a product on amazon after reading 50 negative reviews...well on amazon it is only money that you lose but here you are wasting your time (which is priceless) reading and commenting negatives..God bless you folks..

I trully enjoyed the story very much... thanks to the author for his effort and the post on this website...

Thank You.

when she fuck the first time that was it as a marriage go.she was a whore and slut.the last man who fuck her,she said it was good from the jump.without trust and respect a marriage want work and the wife didn't trust or respect her husband.

Vic finds out his wife fucked his boss and co-worker because they convinced her that he was fucking around on her. Vic finds out about the sex scam and wants in. His wife is already a cum slut, so why would he want her back??

He cuts himself in on the sex scam and everybody fucks everybody happily ever after. Now isn't that better than just getting money and being stradled with just one slut for the rest of your life?

not too shabby at all. thanks for keeping me entertained

When a man loves a woman, like Terry, and marries her for better or worse and she breaks his heart, he feels like the marriage is ruined and cannot be repaired. But, when there are mitigating circumstances and a wife is blackmailed or mislead into sex, the husband finds this out, then he should tell her what a terrible mistake she made and they should have talked before it happened. In this case, he forgave his wife, over time, and loved her for the person she is and not the blackmailed slut she was or the cheating wife. If they can overcome this, then I see nothing but happiness in their future. A husband and wife should never go to bed mad or upset with the other. Excellent story and very good writing BLBones. Oh, by the way, for those who point out everything wrong or tell how the story should be written, write you own story and see the comments you receive. I have and if you do not have anything good to say about the story, then don't say anything.

Fucking WIMP! I HATE WIMPS! Pretty good revenge for a wimp!

Plausible fiction - not really. Keep trying!

It is not very believable that all is well with the contradictive husband and self-centered naïve wife 20 years later. We are not told how these two different people learned to understand who they are and deal with making it all now forgettable and forgivable. Just too far out for me to say this fantasy is fathomable.<P>Thanks for the entertainment<P>PT

cunt. The husband is a total idiot. Oh well, now we see why the US is losing all the way around to other countries. We have lost our mental and physical superiority.

<p>....are the ones who want a <b>Happy ending</b> No matter what. We usually call that "Reconcilation at all cost" to describe a story makes you dislike the characters, but the story never really makes a real effort make you see why it should be seen as a happy ending, or the effort to at least make you start to like the characters you started off dislikeing from the start of the story.</p>

<p>A good register of any stories are Peggytwitty's comments. Peggy can find the good in almost any story, save the ones that really don't make sense. Notice the 50%? I did. And that should tell anyone something</p>

<p>You created a wife that the average person would never like. Not only did she cheat with lame evidence, but she never talked to her husband first to make sure it was true, she spent their money on the affair (going out and buying items she would need to look good for her new lover), she slutted it up with two men in an orgy with such wanton abandonment (where she was so into it that she never gave her husband a second thought till after she was done.), and to finish it up when the 3rd man started putting it to her she went with the flow and started wondering how soon he could get it up again. And you had them stay together and have a wonderful life at the end?</b>

<p>You never gave the the wife "one" redeeming quality after painting her as such a slut. You never gave the husband one reason to stay with the wife, save for the teenage antics of having him "beat up" two of the men who had sex with his(sorry) willing wife. Was she tricked? According to the story she was given evidence, but what she chose to do with it painted her as a slut. She didn't have to cheat on her husband with what she knew. So that doesn't excuse her characters actions. The husband reliving his high school days doesn't make sense. The only reason I can see you writing this was as some form of remedy for the two of them to get back together.</p>

<p>And who see's pictures of their wife recently having sex with another man and first thing they think is "Man I need to prove my innocence so we can get the marriage back on track"? That line of reasoning fell totally out of the common sense area.</p>

<p>And it's not rape if a man tells a woman to change into sexy clothes, lay on the bed to get ready for sex, and she does it. Is it blackmail? Yep, it is. But you need to do some research. You can't call it rape if you do what the other person tells you to do. One woman lost a rape case a number of years ago because she asked the man who was going to rape her to please put on a condom because she knew nothing about him. That was enough for one grand jury to find it as a form of consent (link: http://www.aegis.com/news/ads/1993/AD930868.html). So what you suggested by the VP telling her what to do and her doing it again made no sense to call it rape, because no one is going to see it as rape if she starts the ball off by letting him in the door then follows all of his request, maybe under duress, but without him laying a single hand on her to force her through out all of the dressing for sex down to the actual act.</p>

<p>You have real talent, but for some reason you start off creating truely unlikeable characters, but you never really get around to createing a real reason for the reader to like them again. And no, being "<i>really, really,</i>" sorry <b><i>AFTER</i></b> a night of wanton abadonment doesn't count. You created a female lead character, who made a real and determined effort to cheat on her husband,(the way you wrote the story) but no real effort by her to fix what she did. And you created a husband who would put anyone declared to be of the sainthood to shame, by such a very, very wide margin that he could almost be declared <b>Divine</b></p>

<p>Sorry, I just couldn't get behind this story.</p>

-Risq

If Vick had any brains in his head he should have filed for a divorce Terry showed no trust towards Vick when all she had to do is confront him about his so called cheating instead she takes the word of his upper mangement and makes Vick to be a cheating husdband thats stupid enough to love her as a tramp to them.

Crappy story about a wimp husband and a filthy slut of a wife.......I'd like to kill both of your characters, ever so slowly.

Crappy story way way in disney land

Do you attend a special course to be able to devise such fucked up - "reconcilation at any costs" type of stories?

cheat on her husband by fucking three men. Two were ones that set her up and one was under the instructiions of her husband...but what the husband does not take into account is the wife's very appearent stupidity. So stupid in fact that I would wonder if she was considered as being mentally capable. In that case then Vic would not have been allowed to marry her in the first place. Terry appears to be a woman of sub intelligence...well below the idiot level. I once did a bit in a mental home as a student. There was no circumstance where I would have even considered the possibly of having sex with a mentally challenged person. Is your husband of the character that you would let him forgive and consider a life with this mentally retarded woman. If you are going to write a story like this then please let it be known that Vic is a real sicko and believes in fucking mental cases.

I really enjoy your stories. There are really very few new ideas so it is rare for anyone to come up with an original tale but you do quite well with the material you do write about. Please don't be discouraged by the bitter naysayers.

Well written, but it just did not work. Part of the problem was your main characters were not likeable, and really did not seem to have any basis for a marriage at all. It simply felt like, why bother.

The ending,it was just not believable. There was never any trust on her part, and it is stupid to believe these two people would last twenty minutes, let alone twenty years, after the way she loses control like an animal. Any woman would easily be able to stop,especially since she prefaced the last sex with her as rape.Great story, but a horrific ending!!!

her motor started would have free rein to fuck her. She is, was, always will be a common slut. She never really loved or trusted her husband, no marriage can survive that sort of basis. Sorry the ending is a no go, had they divorced and she dated him, yeah that might work.

The same as his IQ> What a dim witted ass he is. He reads all of these stories and then bitchs like the fag he is.

This is a very good story. It reminds me of K.K.'s excellent story entitled something like -What did really happen in Vegas.

B1 Bones, you should spend more time on details in key places within stories. Follow the example of K.K. RAG

who want be married a dumb woman,who fucks anyone before she talks to hubby.no common sense and that my opinion in this story.i think some people with small minds want us to think like them that my comment.

What a horrible piece of shit story.THEY BOTH MUST OF HAD IQS OF 20 I KNOW THE AUTHOR DOES.

how you (the writer) think people can do and accept for a lump of money!!!

Do you really think men are this stupid? That a husband would take the crap his wife handed out, forgive her, then let her screw someone as a set-up. Either this is satire, or your imagination does not run to believable fantasy. Not well ended.

This story has five chapters of total foolishness in which the author makes the man and woman look like idiots.For sure there is two idiots me for reading it and the author who wrote it.

I've read some of your other stories, so I know that you're a relatively talented writer, but this story is so unbelievable, so full of logical inconsistencies that I wonder what you were drinking when you wrote it. I am reminded what another commentator said about the IQ's of the two main protagonists, Vic & Terry. You have to blieve that their collective IQ's were in the mid to high 20's to even begin to explain or understand any reason or logic to anything that they said or did. And then at the end, he takes her back, when her trust is him is little or none. The story was unbelievable, the ending even more so.

You are a better writer than this.

You rate a zero on all your stories puta. You hype putas and put down males, fully effeminize them. If you can't write even a mild story where you don't do that give it up. You project your own puta crap onto males and real men just do not ever respond to their woman's cheating the way you write they do. It's fact that most any astute observant MAN can easily write the feminine roles by taking a man, tossing out thought and responsibilty - making her an irresponsible self centered pleasure seeking WHORE.

My second reading--- still do not know where to suggest modification to improve the tale

For the biggest fucking loser to have ever posted on this site... I mean my god, I seriously could have done better than this when I was 10.. are you for real? Did you actually read this and think, 'wow, this is good, it should be in a loving wife section of an erotic site'. You fucking moron. This is a complete joke, I didn't for one minutes think that a single person in this entire story was even close to reality.

Awful story and to damn long. Honestly man read your storys before you submit them.

Except for a few grammatical mistakes the story was well written. I enjoyed it very much. Of course I took it in the manner in which it was written, pure fiction designed to entertain. Honestly, BLBONES, I don't know why you allow feedback. It definately isn't feedback. Feedback is supposed to help the author when writing their next story. In fact, most of the comments I read here I wouldn't even call critism. It's just nasty juvenile remarks that are expressed so poorly that most fifth graders could do a better job. What these uneducated people write gives one a good idea of how they are raised which in turn doesn't say a whole lot about their IQs or their parents. If I were you I would just shut off the feedback option because you won't get any constructive advice from this crowd. Thank you for taking the time to write an entertaining and imaginative story.

Why should a man life with a brain dead wife, that fuck arround without proving the cheating of her man.

This story was excellent. I wish I had an 18 million dollar whore! Really, if something like this had happened to me in real life I'd still divorce the whore. Clearly she'd put out for anyone who could work her up a bit. Of course, it just fiction, and very well written at that. I thought it was great that they took down everyone and got a retirement fund out of it, not sure why he'd return to work, but pretty minor detail. I can't believe all the negative feedback, especially the asshole with ADD who complains that not only did he hate the story but that it was to long. Obviously plauged by a short attention span. If the story was so bad and so intollerably long why finish reading it? Idiots.

depicting a wimpy wuss of a male character, NOT a good beginning even for a wussed out wimpy husband as she ends the tail that wags the man . . .

I've read this story before and stand by my prior feedback but would like to add a point that I had missed the first time. Vic's assumption that Terry couldn't love him very much or didn't know him very well if she could believe that he would cheat on her, especially with the evidence. This is a false assumption. If Terry was insecure and or had low self-esteem she would readily believe that Vic would cheat thinking deep down that she wasn't good enough for Vic. Often these thoughts are not verbalized or even realized to oneself and this would have nothing to do with trusting Vic or his character. Thank you for your time and work.

THIS STORY .....BLAH

like this story lobotomized me, god awful POS

For wasting my time!!! He should have gotten all the money and sold her into the sex trade!

What a stupid cunt......But then it is very realistic on the females part!!!

BiBones, LOL I have to agree with the last comment, thanks for making me laugh and the husband for almost 40 mins. What a fucking slut and wimp.

My one star rating said it all I HATED IT!!!!!

OK, she was tricked and not to bright, but for her husband to make her have sex just to "get the goods" on the senior managment, puleeze! She screwed up, but he compounded the error. The phone message was enough to implicate him. Technicaly well written but the plot elements, no way.

this is true to the contrary of belief. After that witticism read on MacDuff. TK U MLJ LV NV

so her getting fucked was her choice. burn the bitch down. your story was so so.

story line and characters were not believable even as fiction

A good story. It's a tried and true formula in LW-falsified evidence of a cheating husband allows a seducer to get into a wife's pants. The theme of trust entered is explored. I thought the last sex scene with the VP was silly. I find it unlikely, now that she knew the truth of the whole situation (the manipulation, the evil sex ring, etc.) and that she had her husband watching, that she would have been, against her will, arosed and brought to orgasm. And, the husband had nothing of the willing cuckold about his nature up till that point. His wife wronged him terribly. The sex with the VP was a means to an end. That last thing he had to worry about was making sure his aroused wife got off. It was stupid and out of character and detracted from an otherwise very good fantasy story.

WHY SOME GUY NEED ALL THIS BULLSHITS TO SAY

" I'M A HAPPY CUCKOLD" !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

my his name should be homobones, what a fucking fag

loves to cornhole his buddies, what a weirdo... go back to Gay Male ---> you damn turd burglar!

You know how to set up a story.

You just don't know how to tell it.

Emotive Quality: I am half and half on this one. It was an engaging plot, but your characterization made me actively dislike BOTH of the main characters. The guy was stilted and overly solicitious of his wife (Oh..you just gave me pictures of you fucking a man I hate. Let me be hurt and figure out a way to put this behind us as quickly as possible). This didn't feel real! The wife was just as disconnected. (Oh I hurt my husband...but I'm REALLY liking this guy's cock...)

Plot: It had my interest. Unfortunately, the whodunit part quickly passed and it came down to 'what does he do about it'. Workmanlike.

Versimiltude: I will give you points for not immediately having Mel ask to fuck her for bringing her the news. And she has to be dumb as a bag of hammers to let Mel pimp her out to someone else like that. Women aren't that stupid! And I can see her getting stuck at Lenny's place. But a 'real' woman would find her own fuck, thank you very much.

Technical quality: The grammar and sentence structure wasn't bad. Some of the sentences were a struggle. Instead of having interesting and emotional conversations, we had narration. Long...lifeless narration. He did this. He did that. He did the other thing. Make your people TALK. Show us their actions.

Better then average quality on the site, but you could improve it quite a bit by learning some dialogue and giving the husband a spine. A bit too syrupy. I can see them reconcilling, but no one HAD to! They were already perfectly reconcilled as soon as the truth came out...and that beggared belief.

Please read FDs analysis very carefully. I was very frustrated as I was reading this tale for the reasons enumerated. Very long-winded and repetitive; it goes into detail that is totally irrelevant. Narrative is used when dialogue would work better.

There is a pre-warning that not. Much overt sex will be presented, then present a sex scene which is mostly or totally gratuitous. Hubby's reactions to Sweetie seem very stilted, especially after he becomes aware of the set-up!

Are you high writer?! Obviously you're on some type of hallucinogens if you think I'm buying this pure utter bullshit reconciliation story; you warned readers about the limited sex but you failed to warn us about the cuck/ faggot ending. I think this story had great potential but then you started fucking up the story. Here you have a wife who's so dumb she should be declared braindead, her husbands boss calls her to his office because he supposedly has been hearing rumors regarding her husbands office romance & he even has pictures, instead of this cum slut going straight home with a copy of the pictures to confront her alleged scum bag cheating husband; she keeps quiet for weeks & finally is talked into having a "revenge" fuck with her husbands co-worker & boss, then she goes home & throws the picture of her fucking the co-worker in the husbands face... But that's not even the half of it, she enjoyed fucking this co-worker , she enjoyed fucking the boss! The husband is such a fucking cum licking wimp that he comes up with this idiotic plan to catch his other boss fucking his cheating dirty slut wife --but she has to let michael penetrate her--once again she enjoys this. So here's where my WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU SMOKING comes in, why go through all the trouble for this walking STD'S wife? Why beat Lenny up when Lenny nor Mel forced her to become a slut from the get go? The wimp husbands anger was misplaced! Yes, Lenny & Mel perpetrated the fruad but this wife chosed to believe the bullshit they were spewing because she wanted to fuck them ! She wanted to become their slut, otherwise why not talk to her husband? The fact that she enjoyed fucking all three men is further proof that she's just a fucking slut ! I think the husband is one of those degenerates who jerks off watching other men fuck his slut. Lets put aside the fact that she actually lied about the number of guys she fuck'd that night--let's move on to the fact that she didn't believe her husband, didn't have any trust or fucking faith in him, & that she took the words of fucking strangers over her husband of many years regardless of the fake pictures, she didn't believe him even after he told her he's never cheated on her! You have the fucking nerves to have this wimp & this slut living happily ever after?! You're fucking delusional ! The wife didn't even suffer, the husband is such a fucking loser that he stays with her knowing since she enjoyed her little fuck session with Mel, Lenny & Michael that its a guarantee that she'll do it again! This story sucks donkeys ass! As a woman I never would stay married to a man who'd allow me to get away with this blatant disrespect, no woman wants a man such as this shit eating husband you have characterized, it's just not done! If this husband had any fucking self respect or self-worth he would've walked up the stairs & packed the sluts shit the minute he sees the picture of her fucking Lenny, the husband would've had the fucking locks changed & the husband would've been in his attorneys office divorcing the gutter slut & suing his entire company & his boss & whoever else the tramp is fucking, what he wouldn't do is try to console the dirty bitch! Writer--and I use this term loosely, have you ever heard of HIV /AIDS ?! Why would any fucking man stay married to this type of bitch?! I may not be a writer but I know pure bullshit when I read it. I don't think this writer is married because this is not how a marriage goes, I didn't care for either character, I think the husband needed to grow some balls, instead of him beating people up in the parking lot he should've been asking himself if the bitch was worth it?! & the simple answer would've been --FUCK NO! If this wife was so loving she would've chosed her husband over those assholes but she used his invisible affair to justify her sluttiness, she showed no remorse, she enjoyed it & she probably was looking forward to more. If she would've looked at the picture thoroughly she would've picked up on the clues that her wimp loser husband showed her in less time it took her to spread her legs for Lenny & Michael, no she wanted/needed to believe that her husband was a cheating bastard. I don't buy the husbands reaction to the affair & her accusement of adultery, most husbands would've been angry that she refused to listen & believe that they'd do something like that, most husband would be piss with her plotting & planning a revenge fuck with their boss & co worker, most husbands wouldn't want to touch the bitch in fear of catching something, most husbands would've divorced her simply because she didn't trust him, she had so little faith, respect, trust , loyalty, love in him that she believed others over him.... In short---most husbands would dump the human cum receptacle ; there's absofuckinglutely no fucking way he'd still fight to stay with her there's no way he'd be able to trust the bitch. Your story suck'd dude. I enjoyed the comments more than the story I agreed with most of the commenters--

a cheat is a cheat you cant get ast that

this writer stopped writing stupid crap like this that made no real sense or had a plot that was realistic.

...apart from the stupid and unbelievable plot I have great difficulties accepting that Vic would stand and watch his wife fucking around without throwing that bastard right through the window. After all, he had all he needed before she got even dressed, - the recording.It´s going to be a long journey for BlB, but he is on his way.

I really hate it whn a good story turns to complete shit. this started strong and i was really enjoying it. then the wheels fell off and common sense went out the window. apparently the storline no longer served a purpose and this just became a fuck story - and not even a good one at that.

1. "Alan told him that without proof of the "big guy's" involvement, the evidence would only get Mel and Lenny for sure." Really? Any person with half a brain knows that having the guy on tape, both talking to Mel and then later the wife, is enough to toast him and the company. But that wasn't the authors purpose. He wanted to have one more sex scene between the wife and another guy, so he inserted this ridiculous idea to justify it.

2. What husband would agree to this? Especially given how upset he was the first time he found out about his wife fucking another guy. I guess he figures, what's one more! Even the wife was confused by his actions.

3. "Just after Michael had penetrated, he started to intervene and then thought it would be totally frustrating to Terry now if she couldn't come to orgasm." I better let her finish - wouldn't want her to not enjoy this. WHAT THE FUCK! How did this story get a single positive remark given the absurdity of that sentence?

I apologize for the criticism. There is much to like in your writing which is why I keep reading your stories. You have good ideas and know how to write. I just wish you were more consistent.

Three stars.

Not the best I have read of yours -

The story had potential but when you had the husband decide to have her fuck the big boss - well it lost me too.

Have the guy show up to be seen participating after the call - OK - have him push her to have sex OK too - but to go through that "she needs to finish and enjoy" crap fuck all of them. This was about catching them and doing right, what the hell has that to do with her getting off??? She did that already with a 3 way she lied about. She has had her fun now just get this over with.

He needs evidence than kick their asses hard - move on - I do not see the relationship thriving is she gets THAT distracted and into having sex with other guys once she gets a little kissing -she forgot him completely?? During her rape???

Just too unlikely for me -too many conflicting responses from the same people

Thank you for the work an\d for sharing however -

I agree with Drbeamer3333 until he gave the story 3 Stars. WTF. This has to be the worst set up for a willing cuckold wimp story in the entire literotica.com archive. There is no need for sex between the wife and Michael to fry the sex ring, and the husband's allowing his worst enemy to cum into his wife based the flimsy rationale that she would be cranky if she didn't reach orgasm is absurd and disgusting. No way is this story worth 3 Stars. 1 Star, only because that's the minimum that anyone and rate it.

first off, why would any wife with even a little smarts believe that their husband was cheating without any proof. next after he had proof of the sex ring why would he hav his wife fuck someone else, he didnt need any more proof. this was simply put in to make the husband watch his wife. third him getting away with beating up lenny was very dumb. what you dont think the cops couldnt break that weak ass alibi.

hopefully some day soon, the day of the cuckold will be over.

I gave this story a 5 for effort and to piss off the major ass wipe on here annony!

The end was so stupid it hurt.

It wouldn't be fair to not let her have her climax. She would be frustrated.

OMFG I wish I could erase that last page. The stupidity is going to haunt me.

What a completed and utter failure of a man.

I cannot for the life of me see how you could have been so stupid to end it that way.

IDIOT

Several ways it could happen: Serve her with divorce papers, wait until the last minute to get the goods on Mike, Mel, et al. This way she has to truly accept what it's like to be single.

This was a seriously stupid cuck and whore story!

He Didn't need to let Terry get fucked by Michael to have enough evidence to smoke him.

Much less, letting him come in her and causing her to climax.

Seriously stupid!

This story is not only stupid and unrealistic but it shows Vic as a real cuckold wimp.

She wnted to cheat from the get go otherwise she ould not habe gotten so in to it. H was idiot to let last one hsve her..there wss no need

No trust between them

Like it has been written you hsve kindred spirit in willing cuckold in Helena Montana

Details on Facebook profile of dearbornmt@yahoo.com

Serial cheating wife who brings home panties full of lovers seed for panty sniffing husband. She emaild lovers how husband wstches her bathe while nose deep in gooey center

I visited the Facebook profile of dearbornmt@yahoo.com that you mentioned. That wife truly is the whore she insists on being called. Readers should visit profile themselves.

Anon is correct in the husband is kindred spirit of guy married the cheater in Helena Montana

versus.....the eyes, knowledge and trust, TK U MLJ LV NV

Until Vic set his wife up, whored her out and taped it.

Complete cuck and whore bullshit.

1*

This story was rolling along nicely, with the drama and tension building I was looking forward to the big finish ...... so what happened ?

We had to assume all the drama and entertainment of a sufficient payback and jump twenty years forward to find these two are happily (apparently) together ...... but we are left not knowing anything about what they went through, emotionally, after these events.

Terry should have been repulsed by the thought of having to have sex ( be raped ) with Michael and I am pretty certain , especially knowing her husband was recording it, that she would not be enjoying it all. But, she not only found the act sufficiently enjoyable, she even managed a climax and had thoughts about how long it would take for him to ' recharge ' .

I am left wondering if Vic wouldn't have serious doubts about his own sexual performance's and her future fidelity .

Rushed ending spoiled what was a good read.

3*

This is the most ridiculous story that I have ever come across. You write at a grade 4 level with no understanding of how people act and react or what reality actually is. Do not pollute the world by writing anything else. Burn any piece of paper that has words on it written by you. Your plot line is absurdly bizarre while the actions of your protagonist make no sense whatsoever. Have you considered ritual literary suicide as fair retribution for your inanity.

Good start and really stupid ending. She cheated period, no if and or buts. Then for those two let a guy have sex with her for any reason is the final nail in the coffin of the stupid story.

As far-fetched as this story is, it was still a fun read. But as others have said, it feels like you rushed the ending without sufficient punishment for the scumbags who orchestrated the scam.

I'll just have to trust you and believe that they got their well-deserved turns in prison as Bubba's little bitches!

He let the sex continue. That was stupid at best. They didn't need penetration to get enough evidence. He certainly shouldn't have been concerned about her possible sexual frustration. Just one more opportunity for her to catch an STD from that asshole. Made no sense at all and hurt the story.

Well, to a point. I would have dumped her even before the sex continued. In a situation like that, if the wife wouldn't give him a chance to defend himself the marriage is done anyway.

It was well hidden by the middle school level of the writing, the preposterous dialogue, thoughts of the characters and the stupidity of every character in the story. Two stars is the best I could muster.