by CatRun
That's what all children and immature adults want. No consequences. No pain, no responsibilities, no accountability. Desert with no calories, alcohol with no hang over, drugs with no addiction, promiscuous sex with no disease or loss of dignity. And above all, no reality.
Your story has become a promiscuous fairy tale, a very tedious and plodding sexual fantasy. A variation on Jack and his bean stalk, sleeping-around beauty, snow white and the seven huge black cocks? Just not very interesting, and no plot, no drama, and stupid zoo-fucking sex. What's to love? Exactly, no love. Just crass beastly copulation. Really really exciting, if your about 13 years old, or have never experienced loving sex. A very sad character in a very morose story.