All Comments on 'Wife Cheats'

But you could use a proofreader. Overall a great story, looking forward to seeing more from you.

Great story. Hope you decide to do another chapter to deal with Leslie and how things progress with Ann. Merry Christmas!

Glad that the Husband is not a wimp and forgiving the wife quickly but the having other man touch his wife ruined it.

Loved this story, very erotic. Another chapter please

Great story, 5 stars for you from me, would love to see this story continue in a sequel.

This story is excellent be I hope there is a continuation! Well done!

Like another poster I hope you’ll continue the story, I love it xoxoxoxoxoxo Annette

Ps I need a brother

Please continue. Maybe a threesome with Ann's Friend. Just a thought

Very well written and well thought out. I would love to read more about these characters.

What a story, well thought out and structured as it ought, if you fail to complete a sequel that has already been set you might be considered both short sighted and having a complete disregard for your characters and readers.

Great story. Nicely developed. You set it up for at least a second story.

Very nice. It reminds me of the Story Of "O" with an incest twist.

Please post more if this kind of stories. ;)

This needs to be a multi part story

Great story but it needs a part 2.

Please write a part 2

he is so dumb and fucking prude ruined all for me

Part II needed asap. Need to know if he kept banging the X.

I agree with other comments. Chapter 2. ASAP

I would love to be able to read a part 2 and then some! This is one of my favorites.

This is some seriously bad writing, yet it has a rating of over 4.6. I attribute it to the combination of BTB and incest themes inflating the final score. Who knew there was that big of a crossover boost?

Full of potential, full of inconsistencies, full of holes, and full of stupidity...

Great story, have re-read several times.

Ready for chapter 2, seeing how the sub wife is treated and how the sister becomes involved

What a great read........

So ready for chapter 2

Excellent story

Thank you Sir may I have another? Chapter that is! LOL

But.....you the writer are a fucking moron! Jeez... I hate reading shit that the author just spews on a page and say's fuck it...there I'm done. Well ...you aren't done moron you have to reread it to correct your mistakes (and there are lots)! Do you have any and I mean any idea about past tense and present tense? I don't think you have a clue about tenses. The story has merit but you make it difficult to read it and enjoy it! Enough said!

Chapter 2?

Great read so far. Hoping for more.

I think you forgot to finish your story. I mean, you certainly didn't make me read through all that BS with him reconciling with his wife just to completely ignore it in the end. Right?

Started off well ended crap. Incest his wife was lucky to be rid of him. She should never take this freak back ever.

The way you've gone, hope you several more chapters

So bad I quit reading half way through...

Your spelling was a bit rough, missing letters and other mistakes made for a hard read. The story was going fairly well till the end. I felt like you got in a hurry to finish and got lazy there at the last , cutting their interlude short, all the build up and then a bit of a fizzle, hell his cheating ass ex wife got more action than the sister! His sis loved anal, was sexy as hell, you left a lot of this story still in your fingers! You should have pounded it out on that key board a whole lot more.If you work on this one a bit more it could be a killer story. But who am I , just another dumb ass with an opinion. Keep writing, your pretty good. But remember most People remember the finish more than the middle. So don’t get lazy at the end. Put some sweat into it brother! Really over all I liked it. Don’t ever get discouraged by fair and constructive criticism. Ignore the haters!

Did you stop with Leslie or not

Had to stop reading part way through you write like an incel

you have a wonderful story it has mixed two different feels to it like this one writer who does satisfying revenge on cheating wives stories and siblings living together in love stories I hope you write a second chapter you did have some errors in spelling and at some points you mixed leslies name in where it should have been Ann either way good work I hope you write another addition to this

This story should’ve continued, why not do it so much to explore.

I enjoyed this story!! I would recommend an editor, but nonetheless it was fun!!

But you never brought the two major storylines together. The cheating slut of an ex-wife, and the incestous sister. You did rush the ending, but it doesn't have to be the end. You have the ex-wife that would do anything, a bi sister, who loves her brother, sex and anal. A slutty girlfriend of the sister.

I hope you revisit this story!!

The story is self-contained but i think it has potential for another chapter.

No big drama, just a continuation of the story and a corresponding development of the characters.

e.g.

-How, if at all, is the relationship between Leslie and Joe developing - both of them are stuck at the moment which is emotionally unhealthy in the long run.

(separation or some kind of reasonable reconciliation - as far as this is possible with a Cheater).

-Ann and Joe's plans and possible obstacles or opportunities (with or without Leslie).

-A further exploration of the triangle Joe, Ann and Leslie would also be interesting / possible.

Or let's get a more detailed "reason" for Leslies deception or another temptation and how she will react this time?

Excellent. Really needs another chapter or so which would also contain some background details about Leslie's cheating, Brenda, new employees, Ann and Leslie triangle, etc. Please!

More of this story please.

another 1 star gay story

Its the one of the BEST story I read on Literotica...PLZ PLZ PLZ CONTINUE....

This was Erotica-Perfection! Well done!

Great story, but it is not finished. What happens between Leslie and Joe, Ann and Joe. You started something here that could be a great series and should be finished. 5 stars

Such a sweet story- loved it. But the title should be changed as it doesn't reflect a good chunk of the story.. You also need to learn about punctuation; it's dismal. When a person asks a question, it has a comma, not period, & it's "he/she ASKED, not said". There were also some spelling mistakes. IDK why on this site many authors can't use that punctuation correctly. It deters from the story.

Having said all that, I would've liked a short piece about what happened between Lesilie & Joe (get back together or did he stop) & Anne & Joe (would they be an almost common law married couple?) Hopefully, this will happen.

I'm just going to double down on 3 previous posts. Not sure if I'd want this as a series, but a part 2, definitely!

Good story, I love it. Is there another chapter to come? AAAAAA++++++

Good story. Glad he divorced the slut...

ZEROZEROZERO.... skipped from 3 to number 6 just to give the rating.

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(9/27/2022) I don’t know what narrative the two Anonymous commenters below read because this was a very enjoyable narrative and deserves a sequel. I’d like to read more about Brenda and how his now submissive ex would fit in his harem. But alas this story was submitted in 2017 and there has been nothing from the author since 2019. Five Stars and it goes on my favorites list.

3 for the loose ends. What happened with Leslie? Did they ever go back to the hotel or did he vecine monogamous Ann? Come on man, you can't leave us hanging here

Where is next chapter?