All Comments on 'Wife Gets Aggressive'

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sexmatesexmateabout 19 years ago
Too Short! And Rushed!

Slow down and make it sensual & erotic! Was way to rushed!

More detail was needed!

Thanks for writing!

Sexmate

DrFreudDrFreudabout 19 years ago
What was that

Ok, the story was not bad. But hell, don't u think it's missing something. Like 28 years! Could you at least elaborate more on what made her take the initiative again after all that time. Otherwise why bother having a theme to the story if you're not make something out of it.

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