All Comments on 'Wife Gone Crazy'

Overall, a decent early effort, it simply needs a bit further "build up" to the various reveals. This version of the story was definitely a "quick" read, so if I was inclined to get aroused and get busy with myself, my mind would not have the time to get fully excited. If the story is based on true events, the "guys" would have been stunned by your wife's behavior, right? What did they say? Were any of them astonished and not believing the scene unfolding (undressing) before their eyes? Since many wives are NOT exhibitionists naturally, or at least claim not to be, there must have been SOME hesitation on her part; a few moments of 'Am I really going to do this?!?' and although it is your story, as a writer you should be able to explore (describe) what was going on in her mind also! Thanks for making an effort and good luck with the next one!

I went to my next door neighbours poker game every week. 50 hands. Four of us, I was the youngest and the only one not having some Italian heritage. On the 5th week it got interesting. I had lost more than I had won over the weeks, after all they were poker veterans, I was a bit of a novice but I was learning their little mannerisms. One of the guys said, well Rob, you are one of us now and he said to my neighbor Stan, I think we can trust him, so lets get back to what we used to do. I looked puzzled. Stan went inside, came back, ok and he said something in Italian. We played, then Stan said, drinks Maria and his wife came out as usual but this time my jaw dropped, his 56 year old wife had no top on, her very large breasts hanging as she brought the drinks out. They all looked at me as the drinks were put on the table. Then she walked away, I did a double take, under her apron she had nothing on, her very ample bottom on view. The game continued as if this was normal, here I was, 4 other guys mid 50s plus and me 37, at my next door neighbours house playing poker, with his wife walking around naked. I lost the next 4 hands. Maria came back, stood next to Stan, double the pot, winner gets the usual. I watched, first Stan was fingering Maria as she stood, the game was played with more intent than any other, Stan won. He stood up, have a break guys and led her to the lounge where he dropped his trousers, his quite long cock bobbing out, she knelt her lips covering his cock, work it bitch, moving her head back and forward, mmm, then he pulled back, she stood, then knelt on the lounge, facing away from us as Stan pushed his cock into his wifes pussy. I was stunned, I didn't get up and move, the other guys watched but chatted also as if this was an everyday thing as Stan fucked his wife, his thighs slapping against her bottom, then he pulled back, take it bitch and she turned and took his cock in her mouth and he held her head as he emptied his cum into her. He pulled up his trousers, ok, lets get back to this game. Ok, Rob, now this is how it works, We have 2 of these pots each night, they are doubled, the winner gets Maria, while we watch, Maria gets the winning pot. I estimated Stans winning pot was around $250- $300. Hand twenty and forty are the magic ones. If you don't want in, you must leave the room until we call you back, however we suggest that in the spirit of the game you not do that, so tell us know. I looked at Stan, you ok with me, he said of course, Maria,well she was the one who asked me to ask you if you wanted to join our poker game. He smiled, but don't worry , the way you play, I can only see you watching. They all laughed. I won 2 of the next 19 hands. Hand 20, Maria came back in, standing next to Stan, he fingered her again, her nipples stood out. It came down to Stan and me, He bid high, I had 2xJs,2x6s1xA. the pot had over $500 in it, 3 of a kind would sink me, Stan said Maria is very wet, I think she wants me again, give up. I threw in my money, I will see you. Stan put the cards down 1 at a time, 10,10, 9, 9,i waited A. I looked at him as he began to stand. 6,6,A J,i smiled at Maria J. Her eyes went wide,then she smiled. I stood, Maria moved with me to the lounge, I stood as she undid my jeans, my cock was hard already. Not quite as long as Stans but I am very thick, I saw her eyes,i heard chat as she took me in her mouth, mm, she was good. She stood, turned, knelt and I pushed up into her, her pussy gripped me all the way, I heard her groan, I fucked her slowly, not like Stan, enjoying the feel of her pussy, I leaned forward saying quietly to her can I cum in you, oh god yes, fill me and I fucked her slowly, I felt her pussy spasm, clutching me as my cum shot deep inside her. I slowly pulled back and she fell forward onto the lounge. I rejoined the game, it was if nothing had happened, the next 10 hands were a blur. I played on for 8 more years, the game stopped when Stan had a coronary on a holiday and passed. I stayed a neighbor to Maria, she wore black and was obviously upset. I told her if she needed help with anything to call me. I helped her out with a few things, then she called me over for dinner and said she needed to talk to me. Nice Italian osso bucco, some wine, she seemed on edge. Now what was it you wanted to talk about. She moved next to me on the lounge, I wanted to say how nice you have been, I thank you for that. I sort of miss the poker games, only because I always wanted you to win, you are a very gentle lover, opposite to Stan who was always rough. don't get me wrong, I liked the way he handled me, letting me know who was boss, I liked the submissive role until you came along. You made love to me, cared if I enjoyed it, I know you didn't love me,but you made me feel like you did. I am a bit embarrassed saying this but I would not be upset if you wanted to visit me on a regular basis. I was a bit shocked and didn't say anything. She continued on, I understand if you don't want to, our age difference, I would not be stopping you from going out with others, just a little of your , she looked down, sorry it may seem like I am begging, well I sort of am,i really like the way you , you know. George has offered , I don't think he misses the poker game, he was kind but he did try and get me to well you know, when he won, he would always want me take him in my mouth until he came. I told him no, but he called me a slut and said I would soon be calling him. I won't be. I still remained silent. Well I guess that's it then, that's what I wanted to say. would you like some more wine. I reached for her hand, no, I want you and from that day on I have been filling her pussy and mouth with cum. It is a good arrangement, sometimes I call her, she more often calls me. Did I tell you she has a marvelous cock gripping pussy.

I liked this story. I feel it could have been written better. Like a previous comment, I've been to a sports gathering where the hostess provided extras. Unlike your story, my hostess stayed dressed and proper to our group, but once ready, announced she was ready for the first one. The first simply excused himself. At the time I was confused by both the announcement and the reactions, so it was explained to me the turns were to spend alone time with the hostess in her bedroom as the rest continued to watch sports, eat, drink and visit. The hostess was overtly sexual but NOT attractive. She looked like she once was hot but no longer. The first eventually came back and then after some time, she came out and a second fellow came over to her and together they went down the hall. When I felt it was my appropriate turn, at the time I was still dubious and suspicious this was a long prank. It wasn't, at least for me. She wasn't the best in bed but she was really good and VERY into it. I had never been with a woman that into sex. Your story reminded me of her. Thanks