by joe1137
Please try to write a story, not a report on frivolous sex.
...I found this story to be extremely hot. I can't explain it, because I am not attracted to other women at all, but I wish this could happen to me and my husband! Wow, I liked it.
Is Sweetie adventurous? Yes!
Is Hubby involved? Yes.
Is it a HOT episode? Sure.
Is it a new experience for Hubby or Sweetie? Yep ... Both.
Therefore: LW!
Is it novel for We The Readers? Not very.
Is it now making (or likely to make) a big difference somehow in their relationship?
Not likely.
Therefore: It would be nice/hot/interesting to participate in, or duplicate, this episode - but it doesn't really go anywhere. Might be developed more in a sequel, but the potential is not rich!
Why some people find paying for sex with a professional erotic. It's pathetic. The reality is you'd be dead in the water without money. 2*
At least those who panned this story did not remain anonymous as many critics do.
It is a sexy story that I would have been happy to be involved with, with my wife.
A bit surprised that they paid so much, but that is up to them.
Lets hope there is more action to come.