All Comments on 'Wife-Sharing on Vacation Day 01'

It can be a good story depending of how all will happen...But this part showed one or two dangerous issues: 1st - This couple was still very young, still in university and recently married (the wife family being rich, allowing that)...And already he sensed that: "She was erasing any doubt I had in my mind about Mike not giving her all of the pleasure she desired"!! Would this be a marriage to last one life? 2nd - Even with that talking, he was the husband's best friend for a long time, and still he "was hoping to enjoy some quality, private time with her while Mike was showering"? Is that the way of being a real friend? Also why he ended his relationship with his girlfriend wasn't too clear and understandable! They had a lot of good sex, because both were fired up, she must know they hadn't the possibility to get married before they ended their studies and got a job (none of them had a rich family to help them), and still she wanted to get married and soon be pregnant? Realy? Or that was just an excuse to free herself from him? maybe he was too selfish, just a good fuck, and she didn't saw in him marriage material? For last: I think this story would be much more interesting told by the point of view of the married couple: their feelings, their expectations, their aftermath...He is single and for him the only expectation will be to fuck his friend's wife and no aftermath for him...It'll be just an easy fuck in the mountains...3* for now

Good start,Hope more is coming.

I love the slow buildup to the story. Only thing is that I wish you'd have kept a little more mystery, keeping us wondering what's going to happen. Still, a def 5 and I'm very anxious to read the rest.

How do you hear someone masturbating another? Or hear people kissing?

Your dialogue needs working on. People just don't talk like that.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

You developed the story nicely. The author's note gave great context to the situation. I'm looking forward to the next parts of the story.

The dialogue flows easily, and including your thoughts as the conversation progresses adds to understanding your point of view. Its a great start and I'll read the next part of the story. BTW, the anons will trash your story. It's what they do.

I'm sure you're going to make the sex very erotic and detailed in the next chapter.

Great story, keep it going.

Nice buildup despite what the attention-deficit crowd has to say.

Keep it going.

The conversational dialogue is great; it flows easily. Literary quality is high. I will read part 2. I suggest you delete the personal attacks.

Loved it. Creates erotic anticipation. The conversation is easy to follow and it gets hotter by the minute. I went straight to part 2 and equally enjoyed it. For a porn story with only talk of sex, its amazing.

The talk is very entertaining and sexy. Good lead-in to part 2. You must have been very surprised! Great story.

I bet they decided to play with you when they insisted you go on the trip with them without your ex-girlfriend. I don't doubt you were surprised but in hindsight I think you will agree. It was a win, win, win situation. Great writing, worth 5*.

I kept reading your other chapters and the whole story is very hot. I'm married 30 years now and my wife and I regret we didn't do something like this when we were much younger and fantasized about it. Thanks for sharing.

I too have married couple friends who tell me everything and I tell them everything, so that part of the story was very real for me. But your wording was way too formal and kind of killed my woody a bit. Good job tho and looking forward to the next chapters.

The conversation flows easily. Great set-up for the next parts. Top score.

I haven't read any further as yet, but I sense a certain couple will be having their favourite fantasy granted.

In my next life, I will be Cheryl's husband.

Excerpt from the story, Mike's words:

"Yeah, it's something [sharing Cheryl] we like to talk about. We are deeply in love, and are sure that we could handle the situation without it damaging our relationship. I don't know if it will ever happen, but it's hot as hell to think about." (Priceless!)

This is a must-read series for those of us who are into wife-sharing erotica.

I love a good wife sharing Story and just found this series. 5 out of 5 ******

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5 (💥💥💥💥💥)

👍👍!

I am reposting another user's comment:

"Dr. Clam - over 5 years ago

Excellent

The dialogue flows easily, and including your thoughts as the conversation progresses adds to understanding your point of view. Its a great start and I'll read the next part of the story. BTW, the anons will trash your story. It's what they do."