All Comments on 'Wife Sold at Auction Pt. 02'

Please don't wait so long before you post another part to the story!

Just a small point. The Clit is seldom pierced as the piercing can permanently destroy the nerves within the Clit, often removing most, if not all, sensation. It is normally the Clit Hood that gets pierced, allowing the metal to stimulate the clitoris. Sometimes constantly, depending on the type and position of the actual piercing.

Good luck with the rest of your tale.

Lots of word to get to "a" point. Most of this could be shortened and be just as good. Some of these paragraphs could be a lot shorter. It seems as if you are trying to make the story longer by using non-essential wording. On the upside it's a good story. Just longer than needed.

Nothing wrong with a long story. This is long winded.