All Comments on 'Wife Sold at Auction Pt. 06'

by MichaelsD82

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Perfect,

Everything that I appreciate in a story. And very well written.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Gratuitous cruelty of ginger root?

I wish something else had been used for that scene.

To me, this greatly detracted from the otherwise loving nature of the interaction.

I can see the punishments as being, in part, intended to fulfill the slave fantasy of “Erica”. However, given Simon’s desire to continue the relationship, the gratuitous nature of this cruelty seems counterproductive to the plot, in addition to just detracting from the overall tone of the story.

I had kinda figured a subspace-style paingasm would result from the spanking, thereby opening an entirely new avenue of arousal for our slave, but I just do not see how any purpose was served by use of the ginger, which was a big turnoff for me.

Otherwise, finding the story 5-star.

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