by Momstheboss
You've got a few typos and mispellings that are a bit distracting, but otherwise this is a fine story.
Jodie or Josie? It changes so often! And all the changes from different perspectives is terrible.........and gets worse when you forget to tell us who IS talking!!
I enjoyed this read. Different from the usual stories you write. Even if there were omissions as to who was thinking or speaking, I had no trouble figuring out who was either speaking or thinking in the story.
Like I've said before, if you'll write 'em, I'll read 'em.
Warren
Ben is a fool and if I was him I would make that witch pay dearly. She would suffer!