All Comments on 'Wife's Solicitation'

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calibammacalibammaalmost 5 years ago
Wow

Ben is a fool and if I was him I would make that witch pay dearly. She would suffer!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Interesting story. Confusing?

I enjoyed this read. Different from the usual stories you write. Even if there were omissions as to who was thinking or speaking, I had no trouble figuring out who was either speaking or thinking in the story.

Like I've said before, if you'll write 'em, I'll read 'em.

Warren

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
confusing.com

Jodie or Josie? It changes so often! And all the changes from different perspectives is terrible.........and gets worse when you forget to tell us who IS talking!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
kick

her ass out

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Good story

You've got a few typos and mispellings that are a bit distracting, but otherwise this is a fine story.

JerrycuriousJerrycuriousabout 11 years ago
Good Read

Very nice, sweet short story.

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