by Momstheboss
Ben is a fool and if I was him I would make that witch pay dearly. She would suffer!
I enjoyed this read. Different from the usual stories you write. Even if there were omissions as to who was thinking or speaking, I had no trouble figuring out who was either speaking or thinking in the story.
Like I've said before, if you'll write 'em, I'll read 'em.
Warren
Jodie or Josie? It changes so often! And all the changes from different perspectives is terrible.........and gets worse when you forget to tell us who IS talking!!
You've got a few typos and mispellings that are a bit distracting, but otherwise this is a fine story.