by GlyderFach
....and how even Alison realized afterward that she had fucked up by putting Sarah down. I also like how they trade off their power with each other, taking turns being in charge. Yes, Sarah cheated with Alison, but clearly she is determined to make up for it and wants to encourage her husband to have fun, too. I didn't like the cuckold in reverse part, though. Overall, it was awesome, and I like how he put the ice queen in her place.
I liked that you made the husband sensitive to his wife's feelings, it contributed an emotionally warm and resolving feeling to the dynamics. It would be very nice to see further developments.