All Comments on 'Wifey's Work Becomes Play Pt. 02'
by Deviana
- 14 Comments
Anonymousabout 7 years agoGet a life and go back to nursury sachool.You come here to read about sex???
Anonymousabout 7 years agoThe worst thing that I can say about this is that it needs a proofreader, otherwise the story was fun. Pretty good for your first story line.
Anonymousabout 7 years agoOnly one story of the last twenty made it over four stars. What's that tell you about the quality of stories posted in loving wives? If you can't figure that out, you're short a few screws.
Anonymousabout 7 years agoit tells me annony is trying to destroy this site and stories on LW or cucks
Anonymousabout 7 years agoJust change the last letter of your moniker to a "T", you deviant.
Whackdoodleabout 7 years agoI couldn't tell who was talking to whom. Pretty sure there was a bartender but beyond that, I'm lost.
Don't quit your day job. Unless you're a writer in which case, quit your day job.
Anonymousabout 7 years agoI stopped reading the moment I realised that you can't understand what a capital letter is for or how to use one.
Anonymousabout 7 years agoI read your other writing post, you seem to write like in script form, rather than the style that others use. There are some stupid comments here, disregard their hate. It also appears that they got upset that your male character is a cuck. Too bad for them- its your story! Also, your tags gave them fair warning- I see the tags "cuckold, effeminate, submissive, crossdresser". So, shame on them for not reading the small print.
Keep writing but next time, maybe write in a more standard format?
Deedee1946about 5 years agoTo heck with the other bar and Betty and Will, wait around for Jack to get off and try his real flaming cum shot.
iameaselabout 2 years agoWow such a wonderfully compelling story presented by an outright homosexual who is letting the other homosexual cucks get their rocks off as they, like the author, are afraid to open that closet door and accept themselves.
Sad really, both the author and his minions, are that weak.
Anonymous9 months agoNo woman should go outside her marriage and get another guy an old guy should go outside of his marriage and get another woman totally wrong different story at the end didn't like it sorry
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