All Comments on 'Wild Flower Ch. 01'

I have tried to read this but there are too many wonderful,beautiful etc words. How about just describing the tv as large and forget the other adjectives.

In the end I just became very irritated which is a shame as the story had promise.

blue..Blah blah,how about when i told u that this is the genesis??U hav to get enough description..Besides it has not ended has it??Oh dont spoil my W.F mood..andd,learn how to advise okay???

wonderful van..The genesis is mwaah

am in love with the main character 'Angelo',hahaha i can see Aidan in him..Oh this time round the younger is the arrogant and rich??!!!,yah this is different..Oh the way mary and jonathan died made me cry..And ubruptly uncle???sure Angel suffered.But i wana kno more about him

haa...I doubt Gabriel's character..sure he seems to be good but i find it difficult to agree that he's innocent..For sure even the kiss didnt make me happy as always.I doubt him plus .........jack,i dont know why..

Why did he insist on changing the name???..Is he athief??,the way he got mad when they didnt make love!!...That guy isnt right am sure he is hiding some thing

am sure he's not the right guy...Am sure

otherwise Angelo is too rude and i lyk it,hehe

poor workers they have to face Angel's wrath,hahaha

YEAH the intro got me thirsty for more..Yeah please van more but am scared,...It's panicky

it shows me how experienced u're..Am waitin van

its the W.F reign,hehehe,BRING IT ON

I've always been waiting for this kind of story.Seeing the Top guy being poor.Hahaha vanalas u look so vulnerable when u're......Hmmm

haha,,Angel will teach them alesson,no playing

the theme song is live your life by rihanna and T.I

iron Rose,it's okay van this will also work.I know u always bring for us quality...Dont u see wild flower????,am always appreciating,.Mwaaah i love u K.H.S

Nice start

Wow! Vanalas, this story has fluttered my heart. I really like the main character 'Angelo' and his bitterness too.

I also agree with josranvictor this series is really interesting and wonderful to read. The description is necessary and it was wonderful from the start.

Please, Van post the second one sooner.

please......

What a load of rubbish I can not remember ever reading such trash I wanted to vomit.

because u're also trash anon,trash can read trash Remember

oh..FUCK U

Well! anon... you are right about trash. I totally agree with you. There is trash but the trash here is not this story. the only trash I see here Is you.

"swish swish all the haters are upset, silly trashy bitch just getting jealous."

Foolish anon wanna be writer, why are you here trying to ruin my mood? this story is good and I don't see any trash here. stop this no sense and hating simply because we don't know you. stop hating on our writer. Make yourself known and drop your stupid story here so that we can see.

stop bring people down with your foolishness and jealous.

so sorry vanalas. Please, forgive the bitch. so sorry. just continue posting so that these anons can die of jealous. stupid bitches.

Mendesias,that is it dear

thanks for having agreat heart,those words were so sweet.. u kno people who are stupid lyk anon exist so let him die in hell

Thanks for understanding our writer...Thanks for being avanaholic

oh one word for anon..Plz forgive us,our love and spirit for van have abused u,Plz atleast be clever and die in hell

Dont mess with Angria,and above all..NEVER MESS WITH VANAHOLICS

People like anon, who feel the need to leave berating comments, are only acting out their anger at their own short-comings. Yes, your stories could use a bit of polishing, but they are in no way shape or form "Trash". When I read your work I see a lot of potential, and a great talent for story telling. Your imagination is inspiring, and your stories are heart felt. You can really feel the emotion in everything that you write. Your characters are relatable and well developed, and you keep the reader interested and wanting more. Those are the key elements in masterful story-telling. I love your writing, and I am never disappointed. Keep up the great work, can't wait to read more. :)

All of the stories I have read from Van have had me eagerly waiting for the next chapter to come out. This story is just the same. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out. The story is new and inviting and makes you want for more. I have read many stories on this site, but I have only come across just a few that I have wanted to follow them no matter the subject matter. It says the writer is very good if not a great story teller. (wish I could do it that good)

Of all the writers I have in my favs, I have only 2 or 3 that I have read every story they have written on this site. Van is one of those writers that lets my imagination run wild when I read the stories. I get lost in the story and can't wait for more.

Keep writing for this is one hella story!!!!!

Aclassylady

You over describe and I got over reading the word beautiful. By the time I got to 'beautiful blue eyes that were just as beautiful'. You repeated yourself right there alone, without all the 'beautifuls' before that. No score.

Take a shot every time you see the word "beautiful" and "wonderful " in the story

Harder level : add "huge"

I feel that you may have a good story but honestly I could not get past the first 5 paragraphs. I am not one that usually notices punctuation and spelling errors(as I suck at this myself) but your reputation of descriptive words is impossible to read.