All Comments on 'Wild Riders Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Was headed in the right direction........

This story had potential after the last one, but for some reason you felt the need to bring adolescent jealousy and drama into it. These two knew what type of things would be going on after a gangbang with the bikers, yet somehow it turned into a high school party with them being shocked to find them having sex with others. I would love to see a rewrite where they actually joined in with the fun and debauchery. What a let down.

trip20trip20over 8 years agoAuthor
Thank you for the feedback

I appreciate you taking the time to read my stories and give feedback, Anonymous. I do agree with some of what you are saying, as I wrote these stories for someone else and was limited on where I could take the plot, I am, however, working on a third and final installment, and with more creative freedom this time, it will be more like part 1. I hope you take the time to read it when it's posted. Thanks again.

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