All Comments on 'Willing Victim Ch. 04'

It was like a novel that I couldn't put down. So very real and intense... this needs to be made into a film. I'm hooked, as the harsh reality of something that could really happen evolves around me, I feel like I'm there.

Some fantastic writing, please hurry to write the next part... I'm here for the longhaul......

Please write the next chapter soon. You've got me totally hooked!

loved it , whens the next part coming

This is a great story ...is there more .please

Glad to hear that most of you like the series so far. Unfortunately, I won't have enough time to write the next chapter at least until the end of the month. Hopefully, chapter 5 will be submitted by the beginning or middle of November.

Thank you everyone for both your public and your private comments, they are really appreciated!

If there are no more chapters I think I'm going to die! When is the next part coming out? Wonderful story. I'd give it a six if I could. And the reference to Kill Bill, nice.

Hurry get the keys rattling.....we want more!

Lloyd