All Comments on 'Windows'

I loved this story, the slow unfolding, the teasing across the alley, the consummation on Daddy's Yacht and the final bedroom scene. If you have more of this great, if not the story stands perfect. I noticed you had a nice selection of work and my intention is to devour it. Thanks for an arousing morning!

Great story, hope there's more to follow?

WOW! I really enjoyed that wonderful story! It was very well written and I loved the talking, teasing and the sex!!

Now I guess I have to read all your other stories!

Thanks for sharing!

Cheers

Lance

You made me cum so many times.... Reading this story awoke all of my fantasies

Great story. Hope there is a chapter 2.

My cock is sore from jerking so long and hard ...came 3 times to that story and ready for another round...Where is Alice now? You better have chapter 2 ready ..and soon :)

Thanks!

I think I would have it enjoyed it just as much without the sex - the storytelling, especially in the beginning, was that good.

tight well written story, and plausible to a certain extent (although I have never met anyone like Alice)

The story has been paced appropriately and it was a wonderful experience.

Hope this isn't the end of this story. They get married and she inherits the company and he is the boss.

Just an excellent story. Slow building to a fabulous climax! Who can ask for more?

this story has to go on we demand more....lol

When the software started zooming in on its own, I expected her Dad was watching and would fire John for banging his daughter. Great stuff Shy - agree with the others there should be at least 1 more chapter.

Shy, this is the best story you have written so far, and I have read everything you have published on this site. You are on your way to becoming one of the best writers of erotic fiction. Keep up the great work.

A very good story. I hope there is another chapter!

This is a great story with a fantastic buildup and great detail. This is one of my all time favorites.

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Great story. Loved the covert action in plain sight yet hidden from view. I love to go in places I might be "caught" but then get embarrassed if I am! Always keep an eye on the boss's daughter! hehe