All Comments on 'Wingman for a While Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great story...

...and I loved the "two trips" line!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
As wingman, you'd do what?

Fuck 'em. Forget 'em. Never call.

Lina's just pulled the wingman on you, but with a full 24 hour warning, delivered in-advance.

Let's be more callous: She, a future MD with secure income, fucks a hardbody on break, with no intention of ever having a lasting relationship.

Forecast: Max's Used Cars as her long-term expectation of your potential.

No, her Hungarian and Spanish parents, expect more. A fellow doctor, a professor at prestigious university, a landed man with Hacienda, whom the whole town speaks-of in quiet reverence. Don Maximillian, of the Casa Rosado - that's the man she'd keep close.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Anony 3/17 ??? Great Story.

"Forecast: Max's Used Cars as her long-term expectation of your potential" What the hell is that?? f your trying to be the cool, clever Wingman descriptor, at least write something that makes sense. Coincidently, "Wingman" isn't only a Pump and Dump occupation. It is often used to actually to find companionship with return engagements, quite often. Great story, due bad it's apparently too complex for you and the Geico cavemen. LMFAO

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I did not like the ending!!

pkp033pkp033over 1 year ago

i really liked max and lina's ending, it's a great reminder that in these situations, just bc YOU might want something to go one way, it take the opposite side to want it also.

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