All Comments on 'Winning Shireen Back: Akbar’s Narra'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Superbly constructed

What a nice twist. Nicely done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
good but not great

how can u be so sure that it is akbar's baby after she had unprotected sex with hernan just before kidnapping.

and y not just make the story by making it guilt free open marriage where he fuck her as well as others and she do the same with him and other with both knowing about it

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