All Comments on 'With Strings Attached Ch. 11'

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MartinimanMartinimanover 12 years ago
🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Interesting & delicious. This story has come a long way & I'm ready for more to see where it is going & how it will end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Hot!

Excellent update. I imagine Alice and her mother engaging in incestual sex with Nicole directing, then joining in for a threeway. Paul watches from a peep hole, sad at the fact that his wife is losing interest in his dick.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Another great chapter

I always look forward to more of this story. Great work. Can't wait to see what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
One of the best

Max, this story is excellent. It is one of the best erotic stories I have read. I would put it on the same list that includes Carrie's Story, Story of O, Beauty series, Deirdre's shorts, et al. Well done. Needless to say I look forward to further installments!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

I just love what Nicole is doing to poor Alice. Please keep it up! And trapping Janet in Nicole's web would be delicious as well. Thanks for writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
nonconsent reluctance?

although i love this series, shouldn't this series falls a little closer to reluctance category?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
I adore this series!!!

your stories are truly the best on this site! I'm so anxious for the next chapter of it :) please write more!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Shame

This was a great storyline. Shame it ended!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Oh I just can't wait for the next part, anything with more April in it lol

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
still nice

you kept the suspense alive

maybe don't concentrate too much on the family thing. but how about a short diary with Nicole dominating Alice?

hope you have as much fun as we all seem to have :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
First signs of Alice's breast fetish

I like this chapter for giving us the early hint of Alice's lust for big tits. This was where her conversion from blackmail victim to willing lesbian slut started to get really interesting.

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