All Comments on 'Wolf Lake Ch. 04'

Keep gonig. i like this story alot

You describe Sam as being pale with alabaster skin (in great contrast to her hair) earlier, but now you say she has olive skin like Natasha. Pick one...

I'm confused. First you said Natasha had straight black hair, then curly brown, and then went to curly black.

And now, instead of having pale white skin, Sam has olive colored skin?

I'm confused.

Please choose one or the other, and stick with it. It kind of throws me out of the story when this happens.