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aclassyladyover 8 years agoso HOTTTTTTTTTTT
I have fallen for this story. Can't wait for the next saga to come out. So keep writing PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!
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CuriousPetealmost 8 years agoHot - but confusing
I'm never sure who is narrating. Can usually tell between Cory & Efrain but not when it's someone else. Nevertheless I'm enjoying it. On to ch 12.
Anonymousover 7 years agoThis is the best
At first I was annoyed because there was no clue-in to the reader when a character change takes place. Now I love it so much... it is a breath of fresh air.
dnsontnalmost 2 years agoI’ve got a comment based on another comment: I can always tell who’s narrating, speaking. Preston is, by far, the easiest to pick out, lol, but they all have distinct voices. That alone is amazing character development.
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