All Comments on 'Efrain and Cory Ch. 11'

I’ve got a comment based on another comment: I can always tell who’s narrating, speaking. Preston is, by far, the easiest to pick out, lol, but they all have distinct voices. That alone is amazing character development.

Fucking Beautiful, Indie!

At first I was annoyed because there was no clue-in to the reader when a character change takes place. Now I love it so much... it is a breath of fresh air.

I'm never sure who is narrating. Can usually tell between Cory & Efrain but not when it's someone else. Nevertheless I'm enjoying it. On to ch 12.

No seriously, it's impossible.

I have fallen for this story. Can't wait for the next saga to come out. So keep writing PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!

ACLASSYLADY

Delicious!