by enterthetiger
It was mostly about the guy. Joyce needs more development. Why would she be attracted enough to the guy to go into the restroom after him. They'd have to be really good friends before that would happen. I expected a story such as this one, but told from Joyce's perspective, telling how hot and bothered she was, how she longed for him and finally saw her chance and took it. I think it would have been much stronger from that perspective.