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Oreauxover 10 years agoGood first story
This was a good first try not a bit rushed feeling. I would like to see more development of who these people are. Keep going though, you have got the basics now just flesh it out.
Anonymousover 10 years agoConfusing
You need to make up your mind what the name of the man is - you have Jason or Jordan - makes it confusing at first.
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